
Happy Friday!
Did you know that authors read?
I hope you knew that. It’s one of those things that’s the lifeblood [also, lifeblood is supposed to suggest vitality and sustaining energy but all I can think when I write it is VAMPIRE!]
I’m no different. My personal library has been a flurry of both fiction and non-fiction. As a mom, author, dog-owner and (very crummy) homemaker, I struggle to sit quietly and read. Thus I get my book on in a variety of formats. At any given time I’ve got several e-books in rotation, a few audiobooks and once in a blue moon I even hold a real-life book in my hands. (Note to my readers– this is an extremely rare occurrence because babies like to be held and three year olds seem offended by the idea of you holding anything that isn’t them. So far, the dog is indifferent but might consider paper products acceptable foodstuffs.)
I have numerous unfinished audiobooks in rotation on two different apps. I use audible and Libby. I listen to some with Drew and some when I’m on my own.
Drew and I just finished Outsider, which gave us nightmares. I just finished City of Ember which didn’t give me nightmares but made me feel dark and lonely. Both stories were cave-y and filled my waking and non-waking mind with that sort of imagery. Said imagery got me thinking of the time I was supposed to go for a hike with my sister and her husband but instead we toured a mining cavern.
It was simultaneously lame and cool at the same time.
That juxtaposition got me thinking about being a preteen…. one thing led to another and voila! This week’s story was born.
(Don’t worry, no nightmare imagery.)
Cave-Blind
Jill N Davies
Velma the guide wore a wide-brimmed hat with a thick string tied below her chin. The dark green complimented her dirt-brown Medford Caverns shirt with the word Guide neatly stitched in off-white. Standing at the entrance gate, she surveyed the group with all the false authority the summer job gave her. It really rubbed Josie the wrong way.
“It’s very important that you keep your hands within the railing. The caverns are very old and the oils from your skin can deteriorate the fragile minerals, ultimately damaging the walls,” she said.
Her hand rested on the chain. A possessive hand, Josie thought. Velma the guide thought that she owned the Medford Caverns—or at least owned them more than any of the tourists in her audience.
“One safety course doesn’t make you the boss of history,” Josie mumbled under her breath.
Velma the guide cleared her throat. The sound made Josie’s heart stop for a moment. She thought that maybe Velma had heard what she said. But no, that wasn’t possible. The general shuffle and breath of the audience was enough to drown her words. It was just that Velma was the sort of person that figured she shouldn’t be talked over.
She waited another moment, dark eyes searching the audience over the rounds of her ruddy cheeks for the guilty talker. When the culprit wasn’t immediately obvious, she decided to continue her speech. “There’s no natural light once we’re down in the caverns. Darkness is absolute. Your eyes aren’t used to this…”
Obviously! Josie thought, rolling her eyes.
“… Your eyes will keep finding something to focus on. They’ll work overtime, straining and damaging themselves until you go blind,” Velma finished.
That didn’t sound right. Josie did a project in 7th grade science class on how babies learned. A baby had to wear an eyepatch over a stronger eye so that the brain didn’t cannibalize the cells for the weaker eye and put them to some other use… But that didn’t happen in three days. It took a long time for brains to compensate.
Josie suspected that she knew more than Velma about cave-blindness. If someone really did go blind there wasn’t anything wrong with their eyes. It was a brain issue.
“Alright, lets head on down!” Velma enthused.
Josie waited, trying to exude the appropriate level of teenage indifference. She headed down the rickety stairway. A large man separated her from her parents, his double-wide frame blocking them from her view. Velma’s 600-lumen lantern cast long shadows down the narrow hole. They moved past rocks that rippled like unsettled tides. Small clusters of Aragonite sprouted out from pockets where the ceiling met the walls. It was incredible to think that without the lantern, such beauty would go completely unseen.
Josie was so distracted by the surroundings that she hadn’t realized that the crowd ahead had stopped. She walked, face-first into the large man. He shifted to glance back. The move was so casual that it was as if he’d barely felt it. But Velma had seen. She’d witnessed the whole thing in the glow of her too-bright lantern, as evidenced by her self-satisfied smirk. She’d identified the mumbler.
Josie’s cheeks burned. At least she still knew the truth about cave-blindness.
“When I turn off the lantern, you’ll experience total darkness,” Velma said.
She twisted the nob on the lantern so that the light turned into a pale-orange whisper, then winked out into nothing.
It was total darkness.
Josie blinked a couple of times, as if trying to clear something from her vision. But there wasn’t anything to clear. It was just her eyes trying to deal with the lack of sensory input. She could understand why someone had explained the blindness as the result of a strain.
Velma was saying something about Gold-era authors retreating to the mines to be consumed by the darkness, but Josie wasn’t listening anymore. She was thinking about how unseen the cave walls were. This was their natural state—darkness. Blindness.
She was moving more slowly now. The open and close of her eyes was deliberate. She held them in the shut position, contemplating the sameness of open and shut—contemplating the walls. She wanted to touch them.
She reached out, fingers quivering with anticipation and defiance. There was a quick moment when she feared she would make contact with the large man instead of cool mineral.
Her senses were overwhelmed by the cool wetness. The slick, smooth surface that might be salty to taste. Calcium, magnesium, silica… and through it all, in the deeper places of the earth, gold, silver, iron ore…
The brilliance of the caverns overwhelmed her. Bright, twinkling light sparkling and glinting off ancient surfaces yet to be touched or witnessed. She was swallowed by the brilliance of it.
The light came on in the same instant Josie dropped her hand. Everything was returned to normal.
Josie didn’t know if she’d actually seen it or only imagined it. She didn’t even know if her eyes had been open or closed in the moment her fingers made contact.
But it had felt real. In that moment, when her eyes weren’t working her brain had used those connections for something different. Josie knew it.
The large man kept Josie separate from her parents on the way back up. She’d have to wait to tell them what she saw without the light. She was going to bolt when his large body cleared the exit but a sharp tug at the elbow of her jacket stopped her. Josie glanced back to find Velma peering into her face.
“You saw it when you touched the cave, didn’t you?” Velma hissed, her voice barely audible.
“Yes,” Josie replied, too stunned to say anything else.
“Isn’t it the most beautiful thing you’ve ever seen?” Velma asked.
“The most beautiful thing I’ve never seen,” Josie answered, wondering how Velma had known.
The End
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